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Thursday, April 28, 2011
ABCs of animals
A brilliantly colored dog freely gallops, hopping in jolly. Koalas lying moveless, now open pens, quietly run. Sloths terrified underneath vines, with xylophones yelling zealously.
This is a nice different type of ABC poem. I have never read a poem that made me actually think about what i was reading. The poem contains a nice description of abnormal events
I suggest changing moveless to motionless. Just an idea. :) Cute!
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