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The rhyme scheme adds a nice melody to the poem, but the message trying to be conveyed is a bit confusing. Even figuratively, how do they stand tall if they're falling in the first place?
Hades, what is your title?
ReplyDeleteThe rhyme scheme adds a nice melody to the poem, but the message trying to be conveyed is a bit confusing. Even figuratively, how do they stand tall if they're falling in the first place?
ReplyDeleteAbel raises some sharp observations. Is this paradox intentional?
ReplyDeleteI like this alot. It read very nicely and flowed well too.
ReplyDeleteI like the the rhyming in this poem. It creates a nice flow through out the whole thing. Good work!
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