When I attempted to comment, it told me I couldn't, so I figured that I'ld just make a new post.
I really likedthe tone in the beginning; you did a really good job embodying the godess. However, as the post went on, it got a little repetative (man, drug, and pig were used alot) and kind of fact heavy. If you carried the tone from the first half of the blog through to the second half, this post could become even better.
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