Thursday, April 28, 2011

Personal Sound and Form Poems pd 11-12

Waves move in from across the ocean,

All of the water is now in motion;

Creating what seems like a deathly suction.


It crashes and you are just fine,

And return to shore to enjoy your time,

And you realize there is no reason to whine.


1 comment:

  1. OK,now I want summer to arrive even more than I already did. :) Good choice of images. "Suction" doesn't quite fit the rhyme, though. Any other ideas, people?

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