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Thursday, April 28, 2011
"ZYX" ("ABC")
Zither, yueqin, xylophone. When vocalists use these,
Song results. Quiet, peaceful, orderly notes. Music lovers ken: just interest
I like that you turned around the ABC poem, it was very unique. I would have never thought of that! It still had a lot of flow and kept to a common theme. Great job!
Nice twist on the "ABC" poem! And your word choice works in this structure. Nothing seems too forced.
ReplyDeleteI like that you turned around the ABC poem, it was very unique. I would have never thought of that! It still had a lot of flow and kept to a common theme. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you changed your poem to "ZYX." Your poem is really good and I like the flow of it! You also had really good word choice.
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